First Draft of Sent

This is our first draft of our meida opening sequence to a thriller movie. As you can see from watching it is not a very good first attempt at this coursework. The music is out of tune, does not build up the suspence, does not flow very well and finally stops and starts throughout the whole  film which is not very realistic as in films the music flows from scene to scene by the use of sound bridges.  The titles are not very good as the film flows on the the titles com up. this is not a veryy good attempt as it makes the film feel very jercy and doesnt let the film flow. Fianly when Billy and Shelby are web-chatting to each other you can clearly see that it has been filmed in two different locations. thji was bad planning as we did not have enough time to film at that specific location.. However it does not work where they are edited in and stops the film from flowing.